so heres what i have so far
i did a few redraws of a couple charaters
and
made this weak ass plot that needs some fixing up and adding to it in the blank spots
theres background information that u need but im only giving it if u plan on helping me with the plot and as such ask for it :
the krazin army , an ancient race of warriors orriginally owned by an eliet force of criminals called the planet raiders, these 2 groups are the most developed races in the universe
the sarnian war : planet sarnia's leader
rince tempur wanted to cheer his people after the death of his father king rage , to do so he challenged near by planet skysor to war , knowing that the sarnian army is one of the top warrior groups out there *thanx to their allegence with warrior planets xeneron, warfrin, vortorong, and traquaza *.........the war was a disastor, the sarnians *fighting alone * were loosing and bad they called upon the krazin army for help. whick the krazins did, as usual eager for the greatness of war ....the war was going good , or so they thought the sarnians were slowly showing up to battles less and less, and throwing parties more and more, until the krazin platoon leader kayman realised the sarnians were using/enslaving them , kayman called for krazin black ops , they sent shadowfox, death wave , doomscar, death snake , and nitro (shadowfox and death wave being th eonly balck ops) the krazins defeated the skysors and under the cover of a party turned the gun on the sarnians and raged war ... the top warrior shadowfox leading the way, the sarnians were defeated
the sarnian leader tempur was sent to exicution but he was not the only one who would die here , death wave , being the krazins most trusted warrior and one of shadowfoxes rivals betrayed him , and killed him as well
shadowfox's soul was encased in the bluecrest ring, which was cast into the sands of sarnia
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on planet traquaza a family of small children is attacked by planet raiders , the entire city was destroyed , one boy of the age 16 survived , krazin special ops whitecrow ....white crow was very close to his sister mage , and felt that her death was unnessisary *she was only 7 * he pledged some how he would get her back.... 6 months later he heard the story of the 5 emerald items , if you gather the 4 items in a rectangle shape , and use the fifth item , *a key* you could unlock the gates of the after life and bring one person back to life, once they exited the gates the items would scatter across the universe again and lay dormant for 50 years before being able to be used again..................white crow searched for these items with no luck......but he did find something else ....the crown of the bluecrest , and with this he decides to gather all the bluecrest items *to acheive immortality* so that he would have eternity to find the emerald items ....the bluecrest crown activates all the other items
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3 years later his search brings him to sarnia , where 1 bluecrest and one emerald item lay
after batteling the planet raiders *who get the emerald item* whitecrow takes a break and rests in the desert, his bluecrest crown glows signaling a near by item, he searches for a few hours then sits down beside a tree to rest, and see's the bluecrest #2 item , the ring, which he gladly takes , the ring , activates itself and the apparition of shadowfox appears....white crow had heard of shadowfox before , and befriends the apparitions *which helps him out alot*continueing his search , the apparition warns him of dangers, scouts ahead act *since it can only be seen my whitecrow*
after loosing 3 of the emerald items shadowfox tells whitecrow of how he needs to come back to life to save his family *which was to be assasinated (krazin black ops families are destroyed 3 years after black ops death unless they produce another black ops) white crow is torn between helping this new friend or his sister , shadowfox tells him that if he is helped , the #2 ring is his , and he will help whitecrow find the other bluecrest and emerald items , white crow agree's
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battles , encounters with other bluecrest blah blah
white crow and shadowfox's apparition are fully armed and about to storm the desert of planet tragaria *where the planet raiders have gathered all the emerald items except the key*white crow ready's the key and attacks , opening the gates ...where shadowfox comes up with an idea
aslong as he doesnt leave the spirit world the gates remain open, once 1 undead soul exits the gates will shut, meaning if shadowfox stays in whitecrow would have a change to run in and find his sister , they could all exit at the same time
blah blah
distance
shadowfox saves whitecrows sister at risk to his own life
bond
shadowfox and white crow are wanted dead or alive
they make it to shadowfox's home planet which is reduced to ashes
they fight the krazins who destroyed it
on earth at night people are partying in a quiet city , when slightly new resident walks out with strange new technolgy, the friendly neighbor says "tnite you will all die and go to hell " he sprouts his demon wings and takes on a demon form , destroying the down in a huge explosion of power which is picked up by shadowfox and whitecrows scanners
their next stop earth
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blah
some stuff idk yet
they fight nitro
nitro escapes
shadowfox gets black diamond
fight jin again ,
shadowfox saves mage again at the cost of his life
white crow attacks jin
jin wins
shadowfox gets back up,
they retreat
meet doma on ardania
meet duke, on neronia
fight richta on earth
fight nitro
kick his ass
save humanity
blah blah , the endor w/e
death unlimited
Awestruck
